Haiku – The Inner Editor

Inner editor
Takes me close to breaking point
With her sharp red pen

 

Written for secret keeper’s weekly challenge, based on the prompts: sharp red break pen close

Weekly Writing Prompt #13

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Picture courtesy of flickr.com/photos/pixel_bunny/2088849295

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Author: Al Lane

Writer, Poet, Daydreamer

12 thoughts on “Haiku – The Inner Editor”

  1. Wouldn’t it be fun to create the Haiku Party Game? You know, where we toss a bunch of words into a bag, each player draws out a specific amount (determined by the little spinner thingy) and then they have, oh let’s say, sixty seconds to create a haiku… Yeah, I can see that working at MY next party. Unless… unless, I invite YOU!

  2. How you do it is amazing to me. Your mind wraps around the words and they guide you to their natural order. Once again you blow my mind. I am impressed especially with this Haiku. It had supremely clean edges and was so relate-able. I love it. Great word puzzling. – jk

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